Exposition: Going outside is better than playing on the computer.
by Bradley
A computer is electronic. Outside there is a big space. A computers normally small. There are three main reasons why going outside to play is better than playing on the computer.
Firstly outside gets you fit. Outside you get to run around, rollin grass, play frisby and lots more. When you play outside it gets you fitter. When you are fit you get more energy.
Secondly playing on the computer gets you lazy. Everytime you go on the computer you get lazier. It also can hurt your eyes. It can make you wake up late for school also you can get fat on the computer.
Finally outside you have more space. When you go outside theres heaps of space to play but when you go on the computer theres basically no room to play. Outside theres places you can go like the oval, stadium and lots more you can run, jog or walk but playing on a computer you could not even walk ten mentres.
I definitely believe that going outside to play is better than playing on the computer because outside you get fit, playing on the computer gets you lazy and outside you have more space to play.
A fantastic effort Bradley!
Beginning of an Information Report: Tsunamis
by Pierce
A Tsunami is a natural disaster. The category of a Tsunami is geological. Tsunamis are giant ocean waves that are strong and powerful. Tsunamis travel a long distance and they knock down everything in their way.
Tsunamis start when the tectonic plates under the sea bed move. When the tectonic plate clam into eachother it causes an earthquake which cause a volcano. It pushes the water up.
A great effort Pierce!
Compound Sentences:
Jessica: My dog is very small, but she can still jump high. I jumped in a pile of leaves, and I hurt myself.
Lily: Jess has an appointment at two o’clock, so she must leave early. Jake snores loud, so it is hard for me to sleep at night.
Miguel: I had to help my mum, or I couldn’t go to play with my friend.
Complex Sentences:
Sarah: I waited in the hall, while my sister was in the bathroom. I practiced my routine, before going on stage.
Jack C: I went to the beach, while my sister went to the city. I was playing on the xbox, before I went to the park.
Ellenor: I made a shopping list, before i went shopping. I said sorry, although i didn’t do anything wrong.
We are currently researching information to write an Information Report on an animal. I will post some of these reports when they are written.
Miss Harvey.